Next level marketing

Blown away. I am an internet marketer. I just raised my headlines to the next level. One of the programs I sell is an affirmation program. The next level headline instead of being about benefits speaks to their pain.
The headline:
Could it really be possible that you will never be wealthy? Sadly, the answer is yes.
I thought the copy that followed the headline was good, but I now see it is lacking a lot.
In Miss Annabelle’s secrets, page 124, he changed from being another salesman to selling them the smoke alarms essence by showing them the picture of the two little girls and one year old baby brother.
You sell the essence, not the product.
I am learning about numbers.When you start tracking everything by numbers, you find out what works, what doesn’t work. You learn most everything you believed was wrong.
I bought and studied the book by Julian Jaynes, the origin of consciousness in the breakdown of the bicameral mind. It was a huge mind opening experience. Totally changed my thinking. It really explained and let me understand a lot of things. It helped me understand what Mark was talking about.
LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT LEVEL
Thanks for a tremendous experience.

After receiving Mark’s presentation, I will have to study and come up with new integrated copy that follows the headline.